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Aug 19, 2011 11:17 |  #1

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Aug 19, 2011 11:52 |  #2

Both are nice captures. I particularly like the motion blur of the model blowing the sparkles/glitter in the first shot, creative.


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Aug 19, 2011 19:36 |  #3

I really like the first one, but do have a couple of suggestions. I would crop off some of the right side to get her out of the center and if this was already cropped, you should try to recover her elbows.


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Aug 19, 2011 20:09 |  #4

really cool shots! the yes may be a little overdone i'd love to see a more natural look! but my favourite is 1 love the sparkles :)


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Aug 19, 2011 20:39 |  #5

lighting is even... you cannot distinguish the key and the fill.... which doesn't really bring out depth.... your subject is just lit up.

white balance is off too.


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Aug 20, 2011 00:09 |  #6

yeah i was gonna say the first pic is a little blueish violet looking




  
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