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Some of my First Shots

 
HLxDrummer
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Aug 21, 2011 11:58 |  #1

http://www.flickr.com/​photos/40655243@N02/ (external link)

Most of them are unedited. I honestly am new to photography so any tips/critiques are welcome whether they are composition related or technical.

They were all shot with my T2i and the 18-55 kit lens. 90% of the time I am using manual mode as well.


40D with Tamron 17-50MM f/2.8 & Canon 85MM f/1.8 & Canon 55-250MM f/4-5.6
YN-565 with (2) RF-603s
1993 3000GT VR4 & 1993 Trek 2500Pro & 1980's Schwinn World Sport

  
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Aug 21, 2011 12:50 |  #2

Good stuff.

David


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Aug 21, 2011 14:07 |  #3

You'll get better response if you select two or three shots which you think are strong and wish to be critiqued.

I had a brief look through your flickr. Not much really catches my (inexperienced) eye, but the thumbnail of this one did:

http://www.flickr.com …6063516589/in/p​hotostream (external link)

It looks nice and has potential. Fundamentally it's quite simple and there's just enough light to accentuate the nose of the car. If this is your car and garage, I might try the following:

- clean up the clutter in the garage, or reduce or control the light that hits the pepsi box on the left and the tools on the right. The wood stuff actually isn't too bad as it gives the photograph some feel but the junk and white bags and boxes draw the eye away from the car.
- brush the crud off the tires
- kill :P or crop out the weeds in the foreground
- probably shut off the garage light, as it creates a distracting hotspot
- I'm not sure what I think of the silver insulated pipe overhead.




  
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HLxDrummer
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Aug 21, 2011 14:50 |  #4

Ya, good idea just using a few shots. Showing them all is probably overwhelming and boring.

As far as the picture, I agree with all of your comments. Just a quick snapshot at my grams house so not much control of the surroundings but agree 100%. Thank you!


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