Final revisions: Music video

I've posted this before and made significant changes since:

1. Timed transtitions with page turns.
2. Lessened the page turns considerably.
3. Sharpened the wide shot of the whole group.
4. Re-edited the whole sequence to the final sound file from the recording engineer.

I think the smiley scene with the two girls at 1.18 cuts too early. Anything else anyone wants to suggest before I put this one to bed please?

The feedback is helpful - as after spending 4 weeks on this and watching it hundreds of times - I am a bit too familiar with it - and would appreciate a few more trained eyes going over it.

PS: the client is delighted - but the perfectionist in me wants to get it as best I can.

http://www.vimeo.com/2​5619906

My thoughts are from a viewer only. I have no background in video production or editing. I think the book thing with the pages turning is realllly neat, but the only thing I found distracting was the vignetting. Not to suggest it needs to be gotten rid of, but perhaps just lessened.

Thanks Bagman - I'll lessen it.

Thought you did a very nice job on the music video. Keep up the good work!

jeffmurray wrote in post #12976999
I've posted this before and made significant changes since:

1. Timed transtitions with page turns.
2. Lessened the page turns considerably.
3. Sharpened the wide shot of the whole group.
4. Re-edited the whole sequence to the final sound file from the recording engineer.

I think the smiley scene with the two girls at 1.18 cuts too early. Anything else anyone wants to suggest before I put this one to bed please?

The feedback is helpful - as after spending 4 weeks on this and watching it hundreds of times - I am a bit too familiar with it - and would appreciate a few more trained eyes going over it.

PS: the client is delighted - but the perfectionist in me wants to get it as best I can.

http://www.vimeo.com/2​5619906

Nice

Thanks Videolady and GanEden. I appreciate the feedback. Revised vdeo with less Vignetting (on pages and wide shot) up now. One last thing I want to fix is the opening shot of the group - highlights blow out a bit on the right side where the spot was high.

Hopefully then I am done, unless anyone notices anything else.