2nd shoot with Nicole

My friend Nicole and I went out downtown the other night so i could get some more practice with lighting (3rd photo shoot). Before we left my house we had some fun getting a few shots with my 68' Mustang project car. I thought i might as well place an umbrella in the engine bay since my motor is currently out, and i was pleased with the out come.

C&c if you would like.
Check out the rest of the shoot on my Flickr

great job I'm a little confused by #2 though, why is her thumb on her forehead?

Looks like it's on her forehead, but it's not. She's just grabbing onto the roof of the car.

Nice composition and light on the last one, although I'm not a fan of the toning.

I love the last one the most - although I wish her arm didnt just kinda.. disappear.
I like the processing on the last 2 more than the first ones too.

The last one is the best in my opinion. The others need a bit of fill light to seperate her from the darkness...

Nice series. #2 is my favorite despite the strange thumb thing. May be worth trying to crop out the shadow of the thumb on the forehead?