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Aug 27, 2011 14:43 |  #1

any thoughts or advice...?

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Aug 27, 2011 15:09 |  #2

I like how the bridge leads your eye towards the sunset. Good lighting and composition. Nice job on the HDR also. Not overdone, as so many are.


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Aug 27, 2011 16:33 |  #3

thanks very much. I was hoping I didn't overdo it...




  
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Aug 27, 2011 17:26 as a reply to  @ swetsastonic's post |  #4

Because of the "visual heartburn", I'm not much of a fan of what typically gets posted as HDR. Yours seems to break the mold of the usual stuff. Not overcooked, colors look like what one would expect, and its a good composition. Good job.


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Aug 27, 2011 17:31 |  #5

A competent photograph but lacking in interest.

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Aug 27, 2011 21:18 |  #6

Not overdone HDR. Good on you. The light reflects nicely in the wood of the bridge. Only thing that jars a it is that there is ever so slight a tilt to the right - I think.


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Aug 27, 2011 22:17 |  #7

vk2gwk wrote in post #13011331 (external link)
Not overdone HDR. Good on you. The light reflects nicely in the wood of the bridge. Only thing that jars a it is that there is ever so slight a tilt to the right - I think.

dammit...you have no idea how many times I tried to get it aligned correctly. the bridge is not completely straight, so it's tough to figure out what to use. I thought I finally got it right. I'll take another look.

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Aug 27, 2011 22:19 |  #8

swetsastonic wrote in post #13011570 (external link)
dammit...you have no idea how many times I tried to get it aligned correctly. the bridge is not completely straight, so it's tough to figure out what to use. I thought I finally got it right. I'll take another look.

thank you for the feedback!!

Next time just try to get the spacing between the posts on either side right. If you look at it now the spacing from the right post to the right side of the frame is larger than the spacing from the left post to the left side of the frame.


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Aug 28, 2011 00:29 |  #9

This is awesome! One thing that's bugging me is the alignment is ever so slightly off. Other than that it's fantastic!


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Aug 28, 2011 00:32 |  #10

thank you very much.




  
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Aug 28, 2011 00:36 |  #11

swetsastonic wrote in post #13012033 (external link)
thank you very much.

No problem. And by the way, don't feel compelled to make this totally aligned. This could be very strong as well if you exaggerate the misalignment a lot, by recomposing to the right. Lots of options with this image.


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Aug 28, 2011 01:20 |  #12
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perfect, but to add a tip. since you are using the symmetrical aspect, make sure its perfectly symmetrical or close. crop a little on the right side


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Aug 28, 2011 02:13 |  #13

very interesting photo imo. I keep wondering what's on the other side of the bridge. Great shot!




  
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Oct 25, 2011 21:09 |  #14

a bit late, but thanks very much!!




  
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Oct 26, 2011 23:13 |  #15

I think if you got a model to sit or pose correctly right at the center of the bridge it would make a great portrait under the correct lighting of course.


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