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Aug 29, 2011 02:11 |  #1

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Aug 29, 2011 03:11 |  #2

Background is quite busy with those light posts. Composition doesn't feel right. Overall not a very attention-grabbing photograph, IMO.


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Aug 29, 2011 05:48 as a reply to  @ Nomofica's post |  #3

Have to agree...just your basic car in a parking lot shot. Nothing really to set it apart...


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Aug 29, 2011 07:01 |  #4

It may appear interesting to you because it's your car but it doesn't interest me.

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Aug 29, 2011 13:30 |  #5

If this were to be on a secluded (for the purpose of no traffic) road and angled about 25-35 degrees from the front of the vehicle, with the wheels turned so that the rims were "head on" with the camera then there would be more of an appeal to it.

Try looking in the automotive forum or in other car photography websites for good composition and placement examples.


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Aug 29, 2011 13:32 |  #6

have to agree with most comments above but aside from what looks like a replaced front bumper, that's a pretty clean looking 240 ya got there :)


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Aug 29, 2011 13:36 |  #7

Leftcoast_Mike wrote in post #13019467 (external link)
have to agree with most comments above but aside from what looks like a replaced front bumper, that's a pretty clean looking 240 ya got there :)

Hey now, don't get me wrong - I think the 240sx is an awesome car.


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