Need some Feedback - 2nd Shooter Portfolio

Hello,
I'm a Nikon D700 shooter and am looking to get some more wedding work. Most of my experence is 2nd shooting with a local Pro.

Please take a look at this set:
www.flickr.com/photos/​31024358@N07/sets/7215​7627444587873/

Let me know what you think... whats good, whats bad.
Please be honest.

Thanks,
Joe

I think they are all very good shots. the exposures are perfect, Great depth of field/wide apertures, good angles. I would try to add more candid type shots and a little more creativity like extreme wides or shooting through objects since that is more of the roll of the 2nd shooter. But overall your pictures are beautiful!!!

good. but i never like the solar shot

1204, of her sitting on the rock wall is my favorite. Looks real professional, imo.

Unfortunate that they are all looking away from the camera.
Try to grab some shots that are more "vague" in nature...like poses where it's not so obvious that the subject is supposed to look at the camera.

Otherwise, the exposures look good. Sharpness is good. Processing is also good.