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Sep 02, 2011 10:05 |  #1

Snapped these two shots at Bolsa Chica State Beach, CA.

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Sep 02, 2011 10:12 |  #2

#1 is really good. Interesting perspective, lot of detail considering you were shooting straight into the setting sun, great composition.
#2 is good, but more 'ordinary'.


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Sep 02, 2011 10:16 |  #3

The first shows power! The incoming wave has an ominous look. Cool shot!

The second is nice but it is missing something. A crop might enhance the view a little bit.


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Sep 02, 2011 11:35 |  #4

I do not like the border. I do like the images themselves though.


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Sep 02, 2011 13:21 |  #5

That 1st shot is pretty cool! I agree with mrbubbles that it shows and gives the feel of the power of the wave.

I feel the 4 birds (could be 5) are distracting in the second one.


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Sep 02, 2011 14:09 |  #6

1st for me too. Looks like a wall of water


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Sep 02, 2011 18:24 |  #7

The first one is one of the best ocean shots I've seen - very well done.


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Sep 03, 2011 03:54 |  #8

I like both. I would be happy to have taken either.


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Sep 03, 2011 09:54 |  #9

Thank you guys for the feedback. Much appreciated.




  
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