Olivia

please insult and criticize as much as you can. i'm just new and would definitely love to hear your opinions and would love to learn more.


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#1 seems a little flat for me maybe more shadow
#2 the light is fogging her face too much for me
#3 maybe pull her air back for that one seems to separate her face form the body too much
#4 crop is off for me and eyes too closesd
just my 2¢

She looks as though she doesn't want to be doing it

good idea to "open" her neck in first, but her expression didnt work as well as in general
i wish she open her eyes in last one

To much make up around the eyes for me..

i like the idea on #2 getting the light behind her like that would be better on a different background though

thanks for the feedback, will definitely work on those points