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Sep 03, 2011 10:38 |  #1

Thoughts?

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Sep 03, 2011 11:26 |  #2

I like the concept but I think the bike is too dark. There's a lot of detail missing. You might try masking out the bike and bringing up the shadows.

Here's a quick example of what I mean. You could do a better job with the original file of course.


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Sep 03, 2011 12:29 |  #3

I think the dark bits should remain dark, it's just the resolution that doesn't show the detail...




  
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Sep 03, 2011 13:39 |  #4

Brought up the shadows. Edit in the first post. How's it look?


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Sep 03, 2011 14:58 |  #5

Looks like a fast bike.


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Sep 06, 2011 16:56 |  #6

Awesome bike, however the image seems to be missing something.... Maybe a rider in the background or something like that.




  
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