I did a shoot tonight. Critiques anyone?
Still new to the portrait game, so be harsh on me.
(if you must know, this was done outdoors)
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Jordan_Inc Member 147 posts Joined Mar 2011 More info | Sep 04, 2011 03:20 | #1 I did a shoot tonight. Critiques anyone? 2 3
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max3k Senior Member 780 posts Likes: 16 Joined Apr 2010 More info | Sep 04, 2011 07:02 | #2 great shots. check to make sure WB is the same in all of them 5D Mark II, 70-200L f/2.8, 50mm f/1.8 and some other stuff
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vid1900 Senior Member 557 posts Joined Feb 2010 More info | Sep 04, 2011 13:25 | #3 Good work all around. No bragging list - I just rent whatever the job requires.
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BryanGrantPhotography Goldmember 1,090 posts Joined Nov 2010 Location: denver More info | Sep 04, 2011 16:21 | #4 max3k wrote in post #13048747 great shots. check to make sure WB is the same in all of them agree the exposure is best on #3 they should also match "canon---- there is no substitute"
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Sep 04, 2011 17:31 | #5 max3k wrote in post #13048747 great shots. check to make sure WB is the same in all of them Thanks. Yeah, I should have probably done manual wb. lol vid1900 wrote in post #13049983 Good work all around. If you have a second strobe, you could use it to separate his hair from the blackness, but I like them all the same. Haha yeah I will next time. Black umbrella for the hair and white umbrella for the skin? Bryan Grant Photography wrote in post #13050570 agree the exposure is best on #3 they should also match Agreed
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MetalRain Senior Member 652 posts Joined May 2007 Location: Salt Lake City, UT/Kodiak, AK More info | Sep 04, 2011 18:14 | #6 actually doesn't matter. you can use the same WB settings if the lighting wasn't changed. 5D3 | 16-35mm L MKII | 24-70L MKI | 70-200L MKII | Canon 400mm IS 2.8L | ∑85 | Einstein x3 |
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MetalRain Senior Member 652 posts Joined May 2007 Location: Salt Lake City, UT/Kodiak, AK More info | Sep 04, 2011 18:15 | #7 actually doesn't matter in a controlled environment. you can use the same WB settings from #3 on #1 and 2 if the lighting wasn't changed. 5D3 | 16-35mm L MKII | 24-70L MKI | 70-200L MKII | Canon 400mm IS 2.8L | ∑85 | Einstein x3 |
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D.Gold Member 36 posts Joined May 2011 Location: Melbourne, Australia More info | Sep 05, 2011 03:10 | #8 I like #1 and #3 the best, slightly more detail in the shadows, but #1's white balance is off 1D Mk III, 1D Mk IV, 16-35 2.8, 15mm 2.8, 70-200 2.8 II, 2 x 580EX
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ethos101 Member 120 posts Joined Apr 2008 Location: Seattle, WA More info | Sep 05, 2011 03:35 | #9 I think he needs a watch or something on his wrist in #1. Or did he just catch a fly? "A photograph is usually looked at - seldom looked into." - Adams http://danhardyimages.com
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Apshiso Senior Member 458 posts Joined Jan 2008 Location: Maine More info | Sep 05, 2011 10:24 | #10 Well, I'm sitting in a coffee shop on a laptop with a terrible glare so I should not comment on the details but I like the images, subject and exposure. Thanks Think about NOT using the word "retarded" in a derogatory manner - it insults those who cannot defend themselves - and hurts the ones who love them. Please see: http://www.r-word.org/
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Sep 05, 2011 15:47 | #11 D.Gold wrote in post #13052604 I like #1 and #3 the best, slightly more detail in the shadows, but #1's white balance is off Thanks. I'll definitely watch the white balance more next time. ethos101 wrote in post #13052662 I think he needs a watch or something on his wrist in #1. Or did he just catch a fly? ![]() He caught a fly. Haha jk Apshiso wrote in post #13053551 Well, I'm sitting in a coffee shop on a laptop with a terrible glare so I should not comment on the details but I like the images, subject and exposure. Thanks Thank you!
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