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mk3supraholic
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Sep 05, 2011 02:37 |  #1

first try at baseball

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Sep 05, 2011 03:50 |  #2

Action shots.


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Sep 05, 2011 08:17 |  #3

Overall a real good job in my opinion. The close play at 2nd (3rd shot) is the best of this bunch because of the uncluttered background and action.

I think the first shot would benefit from closer cropping.

The shots may have benefited from a polarizing filter, if you didn't use one, or an adjustment of color temperature. I almost feel like squinting at the pictures. The white pants on the Angels have a little overly-cool blue tint to them, and are a bit over-exposed.

But I'm nit-picking, looking at them as if I were going to put them in a book or sell prints. You got some nice, sharp, action shots there!

Just for my own practice, I took the liberty of working with your first photo:
-Crop
-Adjust hue for color temperature
-Saturated colors a bit
-Smart sharpen

Eh, maybe I over-did it a little.

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Sep 05, 2011 08:31 |  #4

I really like 3.


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Sep 05, 2011 09:00 as a reply to  @ S.Horton's post |  #5

#3 is your best image, but all images unfortunatley, have missed (soft) focus on the action. #1 & #3 would be better images with a tighter crop. Your timing is good. A better lens, with a lower f stop and higher shutter speeds of 1/2000+ will make a dramatic change. Colors are fine. Maybe increase expose slightly (check your histogram).




  
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Sep 05, 2011 12:48 |  #6

i do want a faster lens my current one is constantly giving me OOF shoots at 300mm I actually have a problem with it focusing behind the subject a lot of the time i have about 300 other pictures from that day that are focused on the croud and the players are OOF even tho im using a single center focus and the players are dead center in the frame


[1D MarkII] | 50mm 1.8 | 75-300mm F4-5.6 :confused:

  
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Sep 05, 2011 15:01 as a reply to  @ mk3supraholic's post |  #7

The 75-300 is by far not your Rolls Royce of lenses. Instead of me writing up about this lens' overall capabilities, I have attached a link from Bryan Carnathan who can explain the lens better than I ever can.
Canon-EF-75-300mm-f-4-5.6 (external link)




  
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Sep 05, 2011 17:04 |  #8

thats actually the usm version mine is the slower dc motor :(


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Sep 06, 2011 16:49 |  #9

I like the shot at second base. Nice composition and action captured perfectly.




  
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Sep 06, 2011 17:52 as a reply to  @ dvandenborn's post |  #10

You did good because you're an Angel fan :)


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Sep 07, 2011 15:28 as a reply to  @ PointlessComment's post |  #12

Nice job, especially considering the lens you're using, and that you're using it at the far end of the focal length.

Rent a really good, fast-focusing lens and do it again (you'll piss yourself when you see the results).:D




  
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Sep 07, 2011 20:56 |  #13

Love #3. Draws me, and holds me in suspense-- wanting to know the result of the play.




  
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