1st attempt at an e-session

Would welcome c&c on these
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Chris,

I think you'll have a couple of happy customers. Nice job. Really like #2 and 3. Only nit might be watching the horizons for completely level shots.

dave

good shots her face is a little magenta i think

Yup, I would watch the skin tones for sure.

+1 re: skin tone. You've also got a bit of shadowing going on in #2. Just my .02 euro-cents, but I'd love to see these a little warmer (minus the aforementioned magenta skin tone of course..)

I'm having a hard time figuring out how to get rid of the red/magenta in LR. I've been playing around with the HSL sliders for red and magenta, but I can't tell on my laptop if I'm going in the right direction. What do you all think of this edit?

Looks a lot better now....nice job!

Yup. MUCH better...

good job! I wouldn't of chopped his feet off in #1 but I like the set

kellen85040 wrote in post #13070898
good job! I wouldn't of chopped his feet off in #1 but I like the set

We debated that one. I have the feet included in the original, but it was all weeds underneath the wood decking and took away from the shot in my opinion. Knowing that, would you have cropped it as I did or would you have gone up higher?

Would love to hear from anyone else about posing, composition...
This is the first time I have ever tried to pose anyone. I forgot most of the examples I had seen on line once the shoot started. I even forgot that I had printed out different poses to bring along as examples and left them in the car.

I know a lot of people don't like jumping shots, but yours ain't half bad! I like the perspective of it!

I love it! Your images are so crisp. Congrats!

These are great!!! Nice work!

Good exposure, good color, great connection and emotion in this set. I think that's one thing that is getting lost in e-sessions I see posted here and other forums. You nailed it, Great job.

Jim

I'd really like to see the one in front of the trading post with the doors plumb (vertical). Please?