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Candid event shot -- which version do you like better?

 
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Sep 07, 2011 17:24 |  #1

Stumbled across a Labor Day 'end of the season' kind of thing in my old hometown on Labor Day and happened to be packing (well, my 60D at least :lol: ). One of the images that I liked, but thought was missing something is this:

IMAGE: http://berniehphotos.smugmug.com/Events/Hull-Labor-Day-2011/i-LmpSB5Q/0/L/IMG5859-L.jpg

This has some minor adjustments to it from the raw; I liked how it came out, but I did a little tweaking and ended up with this..

IMAGE: http://berniehphotos.smugmug.com/Events/Hull-Labor-Day-2011/i-tk57nFG/0/L/IMG5859-2-L.jpg

So.. which version do you like better, and how do you feel about the edits to the 2nd?

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Sep 07, 2011 17:52 |  #2

Number 1 has correct WB


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Sep 07, 2011 18:10 |  #3

Bernie....problem is no one is facing you except the old gent in the white shorts and pink shirt hanging out!! :)
Antway, I prefer #1




  
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Sep 07, 2011 18:46 |  #4

i agree you are standing on the wrong side. ask yourself. would you hang this on your wall and why


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Sep 07, 2011 20:30 |  #5

Good editing but I'd like to see it somewhere between the two.


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Sep 08, 2011 08:52 |  #6

Bryan Grant Photography wrote in post #13066634 (external link)
i agree you are standing on the wrong side. ask yourself. would you hang this on your wall and why

I understand that it doesn't follow the conventional rules for subject matter (I sometimes like these odd perspectives), and I'm not saying 'hey, isn't this the greatest image captured ever? EVER??'. The question was more about the edited version itself, but I do appreciate the CC

Thanks Woodworker -- I'd toyed with the idea of adding some grain to it and bumping up the contrast to push it more towards either a split tone or sepia tone, but for something just clicked when I got to where it is now and I liked it.


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