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Sep 09, 2011 00:34 |  #1

War Memorial. Ottawa, Canada.

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Sep 09, 2011 15:18 |  #2

What was your goal? If it was to demonstrate the depth of field at f/1.8, you've done it. It looks a bit underexposed and tonally flat.


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Sep 09, 2011 15:34 |  #3

joedlh wrote in post #13076928 (external link)
What was your goal? If it was to demonstrate the depth of field at f/1.8, you've done it. It looks a bit underexposed and tonally flat.

My goal was to capture the writing on the wall. I can see it is not to your liking and taste and that is fine. I find it really nice and love it. I just need some technical advice and if you have any, you are welcomed to give it.

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Sep 09, 2011 16:26 |  #4

Its a nice Image, But there is just not much you can do with it, probably because the subject is a wall with writing. Although I can definitely express for the "Service" being in focus.


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Sep 09, 2011 17:44 |  #5

NoelM wrote in post #13077220 (external link)
the "Service" being in focus.

That was what I wanted to accentuate, thank you for noticing sir.


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Sep 10, 2011 15:06 |  #6

Good focus choice. Good idea on the corners. I like the subtle detail of the rock above the lettering. Also, I think the exposure was intended and suitable for the piece. Thumbs up.


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