kona77 Goldmember  1,637 posts Likes: 5 Joined Jul 2005 Location: Southern ME More info | Sep 10, 2011 06:32 | #1 I like the photo but I feel as though I am missing the last little ingredient to make it a wow photo. The grooms skin seems to be off just a bit and I can't figure it out. Have at it.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. Proud father of a 10 year old son with Down Syndrome.
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BryanGrantPhotography Goldmember  1,090 posts Joined Nov 2010 Location: denver More info | Sep 10, 2011 11:35 | #2 i think a little tighter to the head or even vertical "canon---- there is no substitute"
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patrickclarke Senior Member 251 posts Joined Jul 2007 Location: JAMAICA More info | isn't it also too centered?
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blastingstar Hatchling 3 posts Joined Aug 2011 More info | Sep 11, 2011 21:30 | #4 I like it. It is still a good picture
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RiONhimself Member  88 posts Joined Jul 2011 More info | My opinion  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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Sep 12, 2011 18:32 | #6 Thanks for the replies and suggestions. I like your last crop. It is always interesting to let others pp a photo to see their vision of the picture. Proud father of a 10 year old son with Down Syndrome.
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ScullenCrossBones Senior Member  842 posts Joined May 2009 Location: Keller, TX More info | Sep 12, 2011 19:52 | #7 I took a shot. It's a little cheesy but I was trying to add some pop. Too much red tho.   webIMG_0815 by PhotographyByCullen, on Flickr:p Gear
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BryanGrantPhotography Goldmember 1,090 posts Joined Nov 2010 Location: denver More info | Sep 12, 2011 21:10 | #8 ScullenCrossBones wrote in post #13092768 I took a shot. It's a little cheesy but I was trying to add some pop. Too much red tho. webIMG_0815 by PhotographyByCullen, on Flickrsorry but yuck i like rion's way better "canon---- there is no substitute"
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ultimachi Senior Member  836 posts Likes: 5 Joined Feb 2011 Location: Las Vegas, NV More info | Sep 13, 2011 20:24 | #9 ScullenCrossBones wrote in post #13092768 I took a shot. It's a little cheesy but I was trying to add some pop. Too much red tho. webIMG_0815 by PhotographyByCullen, on FlickrI think you need to calibrate your monitor. It's WAAAAAAYYY too much red. And chill out on the vignette. *Wedding/Portraits Facebook Page*
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cdifoto Don't get pissy with me  34,090 posts Likes: 44 Joined Dec 2005 More info | Sep 14, 2011 15:29 | #10 Needs contrast. The blacks aren't deep enough, IMHO. The WB is also off and there's a distinct shadow line splitting his face. Her teeth need whitened and some skin smoothing wouldn't hurt. I'm not going to mess with it though since it's just a JPEG and a small one at that. Did you lose Digital Photo Professional (DPP)? Get it here
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KFormus Member 189 posts Joined Jun 2007 More info | Sep 14, 2011 15:34 | #11 Post the original..would help ^_^ 5DII, 40D, 24-70 f/2.8L, 70-200 f/2.8L IS, 10-22 f/3.5-4.5, 50 f/1.8 II, 580EXII, 580EX, ABR800
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wernersl Goldmember  1,944 posts Joined Jan 2006 Location: Temecula, CA More info | Sep 14, 2011 16:37 | #12 RiONhimself wrote in post #13092280 My opinion Fill the shadows on their left, fill flash or reflector. Eliminate the massive headroom Move the shot closer to their faces, move them so that they are off center. Remove the vignette Small DOF... move out of focus background. Maybe something like this. This...plus maybe deepen the shadows a touch...like the black tux Shawn l Gear
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gtrag94 Senior Member 273 posts Likes: 1 Joined Aug 2011 Location: Fort Wayne, IN More info | Sep 14, 2011 23:04 | #13 holy moly! I like Rion's better too! Fort Wayne, IN Portrait & Wedding Photographer
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photosbyJerry Member 50 posts Likes: 10 Joined Apr 2011 Location: Los Angeles More info | I agree with Rion and like his version.
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Sep 16, 2011 07:41 | #15 YUP, Rion did a good job and I will tweet my original. I do like my sig he put in the bottom right. Proud father of a 10 year old son with Down Syndrome.
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