lady in white

was invited to a photoshoot as a second shooter, cc pls thanks

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hmmm... still no comments? was it really that bad?

Sometimes you can go days without a comment Love the first one - I'm a sucker for B&W. #2 is nice as well but the right side of the model is too hot

thank you casp3r, the hairline lights were a bit strong...

First was nicely composed and executed. Second, the hairlight is too far forward and too hot. It should be subtle, not overpowering. It looks like it was the reason the image is blown out.

casp3r wrote in post #13081336
Sometimes you can go days without a comment Love the first one - I'm a sucker for B&W. #2 is nice as well but the right side of the model is too hot

I have gone months and years without any comments!

OP, great photos. I like BW very much.

@dano_nav- thanks, and i agree it was too hot

@csondagar- thanks ill b patient next time lol

i also post some pics in another thread but with that i was experimenting on the temp.

in the first. i see wrinkles in the paper. maybe push the background more in PP. also see how her hand is behind her butt. this flattens her arm out against her body and makes it look way bigger than it is. point being unflattering pose (which you may have had nothing to so with)

in the 2nd the exposure and wb are off

^^ thanks, cant seem to fix the wb