nicksan, by OCF, do you mean stands and umbrellas? ...or like a flash bracket raised above the camera?
Bryan, The wall is white-ish...
On light stands.
Honestly, they don't look all that bad IMHO. OCF is ideal, but I don't see a problem using speedlight mounted on hot shoe in a pinch. I've done that before where we were pressed for time and luckily had plenty of surfaces to bound the flash on.
I would not have used the Tupperware diffuser though...Looks like you had white or off white ceilings. I would have just bounced.






