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Sep 20, 2011 12:32 | #1

Picture was taken from my bedroom window.......

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Shooting Mode Manual Exposure
Tv( Shutter Speed ) 30
Av( Aperture Value ) 4.5
Metering Mode Partial Metering
ISO Speed 200
Lens 11-16mm
Focal Length 16.0mm

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patlannon

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Sep 20, 2011 12:45 | #2

Nice first try, to improve the image I'd crop the window shade out.
Then, crop the power lines out.

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Sep 20, 2011 12:59 | #3

I plan on my 2nd attempt to go outside...............I was trying to find a few good set setting.
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Sep 20, 2011 13:08 | #4

the crop is killing me

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Sep 20, 2011 16:19 | #5

Bryan Grant Photography wrote in post #13134117

the crop is killing me

I knew the window frame was in the picture, I just wasn't going to drag all my equipment out to a field at 3am to see if I can take some of these pictures. so I setup my camera with the setting which I didn't know if it was going to come out. My camera is setup on my tripod so rolled up the windows and pulled the trigger.
But thanks for pointing out the Bad crop I had ...............Im pretty sure I would have do a better job on the next shot.

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Sep 20, 2011 16:29 | #6

This is with a better crop

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