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first real try at editorial fashion.

 
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Sep 21, 2011 18:10 |  #1

What do you think? Criticism encouraged.

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Sep 21, 2011 20:37 |  #2

nice capture, but busy background




  
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Sep 21, 2011 21:17 |  #3

to be hyper critical i would take the scratch off her leg in the first
not sure about the whole one stocking thing, and i would have taken the white label off the bottle


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Sep 21, 2011 22:17 |  #4

Bryan Grant Photography wrote in post #13142357 (external link)
to be hyper critical i would take the scratch off her leg in the first
not sure about the whole one stocking thing, and i would have taken the white label off the bottle

Great eye!


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Sep 22, 2011 01:18 |  #5

I agree on the busy background. I would have also shot with a little thinner dof.


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