Nice improvement ... hopefully I'm helping more than hindering. Though looks like 30 sec might be too much for your lens, this seems to have some slight drift creeping in around the edges. Do you have any 15 and 20 sec subs? Also, there are some great tips and tutorials online for processing which will be a great help. Some suggest to do several rounds of adjustments, as you need to stretch the data.
Ofcourse something I should have mentioned earlier, to help with focusing (though not sure how well it works with camera lenses, but it's great for telescopes) is a 'Bahtinov mask'. They go for around $40 in Australia, so probably US$10, haha. You hold this in front of your 'scope' while focusing and you see spikes around your stars. It's like an X with an I overlayed, when it's out of focus the I will be offset slightly, you then focus until the spikes are centred. Might be worth looking into if you have no joy with your lenses.
Could be your old film gear focused better, but something I see online is that there's a lot more pixel peeping going on and everybody is more critical of focus these days, where you'll view an image 100% (or more) and not as it is printed out from the local photo lab spits them out.
Another tip I've seen posted, is to tape the focusing ring on your lens once you've got it right, saves accidently bumping it, especially when working in the dark ... though you'll probably bump it slightly when taping it ... again something to try as it might be worth it. Try something that isn;t too gluey or leaves too much residue, I find 3M micropore tape from pharmacies works well for some of my gear.
The EOS utility is probably better for reviewing shots as the Live View is only slightly better than the back of your camera. If you do use Live View, make sure you select the '200%' or '2x' button, to zoom in, helps to magnify things a little.
Best of luck!
- Daniel
p.s. Don't be put off if you buy some gear and get clouds for a week or two, always happens!
2x 50d: with 17-85mm f4-5.6, 100mm Macro USM, 50mm f1.8, 2x Sigma 30mm f1.4, 55-250mm (kit lens), Canon 100-400mm L, Tamron 200-400mm f5.6, Samyang 8mm. 480mm refactor with HEQ5. Home made beamsplitter stereo rig.