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Sep 29, 2011 05:00 |  #1

what you guys think?


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Sep 29, 2011 05:46 |  #2

Don't like the first pose. The model behind the pole doesn't work for me and the way she's standing makes her look like she's got HUGE hips, which, obviously, she doesn't.

I like the 2nd shot but her eyes aren't sharp enough for me. But not horrible.




  
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Sep 29, 2011 08:02 |  #3

2nd and 3rd image pose is good.




  
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Sep 29, 2011 11:20 |  #4

kinda like 2nd and 3rd, but subject seems little bit soft. sp. the 3rd one bg seems sharper


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Sep 29, 2011 11:39 |  #5

What lens are you using and where are you focusing? It seems that all three shots are a little soft. ARe you using Manual or Auto?


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Sep 29, 2011 16:24 as a reply to  @ blackzarg's post |  #6

The first 2 are sharp on my comp.idk y it seems like this




  
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Sep 29, 2011 16:26 |  #7

I'm using auto




  
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Sep 29, 2011 18:29 |  #8

I like #2 and #3, but #2 is really soft. Could be some compression issues on the site you are using to upload the photos... You can try with flickr, many here are using this site.


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Sep 29, 2011 19:05 |  #9

Number two for me by a long shot. I'm on my phone so I can't tell if it's sharp or not.




  
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Sep 29, 2011 21:45 |  #10

sebr wrote in post #13184211 (external link)
I like #2 and #3, but #2 is really soft. Could be some compression issues on the site you are using to upload the photos... You can try with flickr, many here are using this site.

ya i think that might be it




  
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Sep 29, 2011 21:46 |  #11

does contrast and saturation look good over all? on my screen it looks good but i have an imac so idk how others see it




  
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Sep 29, 2011 22:41 |  #12

what do you guys think of this one?

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Sep 30, 2011 15:19 |  #13

I'm on my phone so not sure about the sharpness, but I'm not liking her hip bone sticking out.


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Sep 30, 2011 15:41 |  #14

Much better.


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Oct 01, 2011 07:21 as a reply to  @ rsieminski's post |  #15

What lens are you using? It's still not sharp.

I agre the hip bone sticking out looks awkward. I also don't like the hair covering her face in this shot.

I'd also rather see her face turned towards the light rather than away.

I know, picky but that's how I learn as well. :) Keep working it. Certainly better than it was before.




  
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