Sep 29, 2011 21:11 | #1 I'm not sure which version I should enter. Both have an interesting yet different feel to them. The deadline is tomorrow night so as much c&c i can get by then would be very much appreciated. Thanks!
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop  More info | Sep 29, 2011 21:27 | #2 Not a big fan of the angled shots so I'd go with #1. Dave
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Sep 29, 2011 21:32 | #3 What distortion are you talking about? The fish eye? EOS 5D Mark II - EF 70-200mm f/2.8L IS II USM - EF 50mm f/1.4 USM - EF 40mm f/2.8 STM - Speedlite 600EX-RT - Alien Bees B800 x2
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sapearl Cream of the Crop  More info | Sep 29, 2011 21:34 | #4 I certainly agree they have a different feel to them - but I much, much prefer the first, straight one. You have an extreme "pin-cushioning" effect. Can you straighten that out? I feel it would really improve that first image. I agree with Titus about the distortion. GEAR LIST
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#1, but I agree that the distortion is distracting. Canon 5Diii, 24-105L, 17-40L, 70-200L 2.8, 50.
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Sep 29, 2011 21:49 | #6 This better?  IMG_3553-6 by MrJack787, on FlickrEOS 5D Mark II - EF 70-200mm f/2.8L IS II USM - EF 50mm f/1.4 USM - EF 40mm f/2.8 STM - Speedlite 600EX-RT - Alien Bees B800 x2
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Inst!nct Member 134 posts Joined Nov 2009 More info | Sep 29, 2011 21:57 | #7 Oh my god so much better, wha happened in the first picture with that pincushioning?
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Sep 29, 2011 22:24 | #8 Just an effect I put on. Guess it didn't go over well haha. Thank you all for the help so far. EOS 5D Mark II - EF 70-200mm f/2.8L IS II USM - EF 50mm f/1.4 USM - EF 40mm f/2.8 STM - Speedlite 600EX-RT - Alien Bees B800 x2
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Mark1 Cream of the Crop  6,725 posts Likes: 7 Joined Feb 2008 Location: Maryland More info | Sep 29, 2011 22:35 | #10 How much editing are you allowed to do? Some limit you some dont. If you are alowed to edit. I would pull out the ash tray and the black thing above it. They do nothing for the image And do distract from the man. I might even pull out the white thing just over his head.
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Sep 29, 2011 22:37 | #12 Any other thoughts on it? Anything else to fix or add? I want to do as little pp as possible on it. So far all I have done, aside from adding and now subtracting the pincushioning effect, is up the contrast a bit. EOS 5D Mark II - EF 70-200mm f/2.8L IS II USM - EF 50mm f/1.4 USM - EF 40mm f/2.8 STM - Speedlite 600EX-RT - Alien Bees B800 x2
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Sep 29, 2011 22:39 | #13 The re-post is much better. You shouldn't be getting that distortion at 135mm.... Dave
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Sep 29, 2011 22:43 | #14 Burn a little of the highlights at the end of the "tunnel" so that you get more attention on your subject. Juan
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Sep 29, 2011 23:37 | #15 How is this? I took down the exposure at the end of the tunnel.  IMG_3553-7 by MrJack787, on FlickrEOS 5D Mark II - EF 70-200mm f/2.8L IS II USM - EF 50mm f/1.4 USM - EF 40mm f/2.8 STM - Speedlite 600EX-RT - Alien Bees B800 x2
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