Engagement Shoot

My best friend recently got Engaged. So, I talked him into letting me take some pics for them. Let me know what you think.. Thanks for the feedback.

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Nice post processing on all of them. I think my favorite is # 2 & 4. # 3 is beautiful also, just would have had the guy maybe lean in to kiss her. # 8 looks weird with that thing covering her face.

Nice though keep'em coming

Most of them appear too soft for me...............

The grate in the last could have been more strategically placed...............m​aybe. Otherwise should have been omitted.

Thanks for the feedback. Trying to improve.

here are others, let me know what you think. Thanks again

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IMHO, your second set is better than the first. Nice captures. The last 2 could be tighter cropped.

Thanks. I gave my friend about 100 pics. I just posted some random shots.

The processing on these are all over the place so I don't get a strong sense as these being a coherent set.

There's lots of redundant framing and generally speaking, most are framed too tight. You shot this in NYC...I wanna see a lot more of the environment incorporated in the images.

In #3, the person in the background is a distraction.

I agree that the second set is stronger but suffers the same problems as the first.

Thanks for the comments. I always admire your work nicksan.

I see what you're saying.

I'm gonna try to put it to use.