Good posing, happy looking family, seems fairly well lit (although I'd let other people comment on this since I'm still in the learning stages of lighting) The only thing bother me about this photo is the blue background (I'm biased and hate most studio shots--I just love outdoors more, but that's not your fault and certainly isn't always an option.) Another thing killing me about this photo (and is DEF not your fault) is the woman's pink dress. It just doesn't go with everyone else's outfits. At the same time, she's reasonably well covered by the younger son. Otherwise, IMO, not a bad attempt.