First time wedding, looking for CC

I was a jumped on as a second shooter and shot my first wedding this past weekend. Just want to learn what I can do better:

IMAGE IS A REDIRECT OR MISSING! HTTP response: 404 | MIME changed to 'text/html' | Byte size: ZERO

IMAGE IS A REDIRECT OR MISSING! HTTP response: 404 | MIME changed to 'text/html' | Byte size: ZERO

IMAGE IS A REDIRECT OR MISSING! HTTP response: 404 | MIME changed to 'text/html' | Byte size: ZERO

IMAGE IS A REDIRECT OR MISSING! HTTP response: 404 | MIME changed to 'text/html' | Byte size: ZERO

IMAGE IS A REDIRECT OR MISSING! HTTP response: 404 | MIME changed to 'text/html' | Byte size: ZERO

IMAGE IS A REDIRECT OR MISSING! HTTP response: 404 | MIME changed to 'text/html' | Byte size: ZERO

IMAGE IS A REDIRECT OR MISSING! HTTP response: 404 | MIME changed to 'text/html' | Byte size: ZERO

IMAGE IS A REDIRECT OR MISSING! HTTP response: 404 | MIME changed to 'text/html' | Byte size: ZERO

Here's some more:
http://christopherrhoa​ds.smugmug.com …nBvm8/0/M/i-QknBvm8-M.jpg
http://christopherrhoa​ds.smugmug.com …QNX3V/0/M/i-vXQNX3V-M.jpg
http://christopherrhoa​ds.smugmug.com …CpVVB/0/M/i-ZsCpVVB-M.jpg
http://christopherrhoa​ds.smugmug.com …SJfx3/0/M/i-wLSJfx3-M.jpg
http://christopherrhoa​ds.smugmug.com …D2pgf/0/M/i-VKD2pgf-M.jpg
http://christopherrhoa​ds.smugmug.com …KkfDg/0/M/i-6MKkfDg-M.jpg
http://christopherrhoa​ds.smugmug.com …M9wLw/0/M/i-GgM9wLw-M.jpg

Excess images changed to links. POTN max. is 8 images per thread.

Jon

Crap wrong section.... Can mod move this please?

The first two seem fine. I'd try to get the detail back on the third one of the dress in the blown out section. The next one and last ones the girls seem orange. Unless that's true to life, then it's not your fault, it's Lindsey Lohans lol.

^thank you much. She is pretty dark. Her mother is the one thats handing the flowers to the bride. I'll work on it a bit, what I'm thinking is that the lights being yellow is making her a lot more Orange then what she is.

Please disregaurd everything on this page..... I just learned that something isn't right with how my monitor is displaying photos and the way other computers and viewing them..... I'm not sure of what the issue is but it appears as if photos that are exposed correctly on my monitor are actually not exposed correctly at all for some reason. Brightness seems to be strange.

Those are some great shots.. some do seem a tad bit over saturated but they do not look bad at all. IMO