I think I'd rather see color, at least for roses.
You might try increasing your DOF a bit and moving the focal plane back just a bit. Only the closest rose has anything in sharp focus.
The adjacent blooms only part way in the picture don't do a whole lot for me; I think I'd rather see the blooms in the picture with nothing distracting around it, or enough around it to be a background.
I do like the stage of opening those roses are in, but the one on the right seems more attractive to me.
I think you could try a lighter background and crank up the contrast a bit more. Some sharpening might be nice too, but don't sharpen it so much the transition between sharp and slightly OOF is abrupt.