Took another shot at getting that late evening shot of the happy couple; Softbox camera left at 45 deg and about 3 feet away and above them
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RockyRhode Goldmember  1,416 posts Likes: 6 Joined Apr 2011 Location: Sacramento More info | Oct 14, 2011 23:42 | #1 |
whoty Goldmember  More info | Oct 14, 2011 23:51 | #2 The skin tones has a a slight green tint. Also the bride doesn't look quite as sharp as the groom. I would have used F/4 just to make sure the both were tack. The background IMHO is a bit distracting. One thing you definitely did well was nail the exposure. There is nothing worse than a brilliant image of a fuzzy concept. - Ansel Adams
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop  More info | Oct 15, 2011 09:45 | #3 Way too much head room in this one. The couple comprise about half the frame. Dave
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SDavisPhoto Senior Member  269 posts Joined Jul 2008 Location: Martinsville Va. More info | Oct 15, 2011 09:47 | #4 Titus213 wrote in post #13253997  Way too much head room in this one. The couple comprise about half the frame. And I think the image could use an exposure bump - it looks dark to me. Did you meter the flash? +1 way to much 5D, 60D, Canon 17-55mm 1:2.8 IS, 70-300mm F/4-5.6 L, 24-105mm f/1:4 L IS, EF 50mm f/1.4, Sigma 105mm 2:8 Macro, Tokina 11-16mm ATX Pro DX II, Canon 580SX II, two 430ex's and lots of filters
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OkiePhoto Member 52 posts Joined Sep 2011 Location: Norman Oklahoma More info | Oct 15, 2011 10:06 | #5  Permanent banI think a bit of CameraRaw softening might be nice. Of course if you do that you would want to use Photoshop to sharpen the eyes as well and the dodge/burn tool.
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Oct 15, 2011 10:23 | #6 Rocky Rhode wrote in post #13252960 Took another shot at getting that late evening shot of the happy couple; Softbox camera left at 45 deg and about 3 feet away and above them iso 100 70mm f/2.8 1/160  Canon 5DSr Canon 5D MK4 Canon 5D MK2 17-40 L 16-35 2.8 L Canon 70-200 2.8 IS L Canon 300 2.8 Canon 600mm 4.0 IS LCanon 50mm 1.2 Canon 85mm 1.8Canon 600EX
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Oct 15, 2011 12:24 | #7 A quick exposure bump and face bump in ACR along with a crop. The blacks are still quite blocked up.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. Dave
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Oct 16, 2011 15:06 | #9 Thanks - I battled with that crop but finally thought it balance him better in the shot. The adjustments were done in ACR. Dave
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Numenorean Cream of the Crop 5,013 posts Likes: 28 Joined Feb 2011 More info | Oct 16, 2011 22:25 | #10 Rocky Rhode wrote in post #13258091 Thank you for all the feedback; Titus I like your adjustment the most, just with the crop didn't chop off the left side of the bride. The crop makes the shot more flattering to her though. It's much better.
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russ71satellite Goldmember  More info | Oct 16, 2011 22:45 | #11 hmm...unfortunately, he looks more shocked and afraid than he does happy. Canon EOS 5D, 85mm 1.8, 50mm 1.8, Yongnuo YN560II, Dynaphos strobe, 16 inch beauty dish, Vagabond mini.
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gregr2 Goldmember  More info | The blacks are definitely blocked, would be good if you could pull them up some. His jacket has not detail in it at all and blends into the background. Flickr
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