theextremist04 Goldmember  1,224 posts Joined Feb 2010 Location: Kansas City More info | Oct 15, 2011 23:45 | #1 I happened to be on fall break this week and it was my sister's homecoming, so I figured I might as well have fun with the new 5D and get some shots in. By the way, I love my Sigmalux. So much.
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AlanMura Senior Member  632 posts Likes: 1 Joined Sep 2009 Location: Los Angeles, CA More info | Oct 16, 2011 03:21 | #2 I think the shots have potential but I am not sure about your cropping choices (personally). Also, in photo 2, the sky is way too over exposed. If you stopped down, and used more fill I think the shot would have been a lot better. ALANMURA.COM
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JeffCanon Senior Member  More info | Oct 16, 2011 10:00 | #3 You got some cute & playful shots; I agree that the sky in #2 is little too blow out & need a little PS; watch your backgrounds in park & the wrinkles in the clothing mostly the guys suits, crop out objects along the edges that draw the eye - #6 the sidewalk a long top edge Critiques Welcomed
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vid1900 Senior Member 557 posts Joined Feb 2010 More info | Oct 16, 2011 13:08 | #4 Some cute shots, but your watermark is WAY too distracting! It is 20% of some of the photos. No bragging list - I just rent whatever the job requires.
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Oct 16, 2011 17:32 | #5 i like the 2nd one. Seems like your Dof is a little shallow causing causing some oof on a couple of them. R6; 7D; 450D; Canon 85 1.4L; 50 1.4; 70-200 2.8L II; Tamron 17-50 2.8; Tamron 18-270 VC;
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Oct 16, 2011 18:41 | #6 AlanMura wrote in post #13256447  I think the shots have potential but I am not sure about your cropping choices (personally). Also, in photo 2, the sky is way too over exposed. If you stopped down, and used more fill I think the shot would have been a lot better. I was going for the dreamy look, and there wasn't really anything in the sky that was worth seeing. As far as cropping goes, I'll take a look at it. JeffCanon wrote: You got some cute & playful shots; I agree that the sky in #2 is little too blow out & need a little PS; watch your backgrounds in park & the wrinkles in the clothing mostly the guys suits, crop out objects along the edges that draw the eye - #6 the sidewalk a long top edge Some of the backgrounds were hard to work with; there were way, way more people at the park than I was expecting and they had drained the lake the day before, which made it even harder. vid1900 wrote: Some cute shots, but your watermark is WAY too distracting! It is 20% of some of the photos. It's kind of hard to work with the watermark in zenfolio; I've found that if I make the file smaller the watermark ends up being tiny on uncropped photos, and I'd rather have too big than too small. fighterfighter4u wrote: i like the 2nd one. Seems like your Dof is a little shallow causing causing some oof on a couple of them. If you're talking about #4, I totally get it, that was just a fun shot but it ended up looking really good. -Michael
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HappySnapper90 Cream of the Crop 5,145 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2008 Location: Cleveland, Ohio More info | Oct 16, 2011 19:43 | #7 Very good color balance on these. Photo 1, everyone seems to be leaning to the right so consider rotating it slightly. Photo 1 and 3 I suggest getting closer to the people, it's not always a requirement to show people from head to toe. These photos would have a bigger "impact" if the people filled the frame more.
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Oct 16, 2011 20:16 | #8 HappySnapper90 wrote in post #13259098 Very good color balance on these. Photo 1, everyone seems to be leaning to the right so consider rotating it slightly. Photo 1 and 3 I suggest getting closer to the people, it's not always a requirement to show people from head to toe. These photos would have a bigger "impact" if the people filled the frame more. What's a sigmalux? Never heard of that before. Thanks! It's the Sigma 50mm f/1.4. And on #3 I was trying to get some of the colors of the trees in the background. -Michael
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