First Engagement Shoot - C&C Welcome

Pro bono engagement shoot to gain more experience with portraits...50D using the 24-70 f2.8 with 430 EX II and diffuser. Let me know your thoughts!

Here's a few more...

I am really not feeling the color on the first one, if you were going for a vintage look that is not really what is showing up, it just looks like the color is way off. I want to comment on the 2nd and third but they are quite tiny.

The first one needs more crop.

The other 2 are really small, but look like snapshots.

The first of the attachments looks decent, but have them turn more toward the sun. I think that diffuser on your flash was hurting your pictures as the sun looks like it overpowered your diffused light. I can't really tell though since it's so small!

The second looks like there are too many houses in the background. Try taking them to a park or somewhere more isolated.

Joanne85016 wrote in post #13259410
Pro bono engagement shoot to gain more experience with portraits...50D using the 24-70 f2.8 with 430 EX II and diffuser. Let me know your thoughts!

What was the ISO on the first one? The ceiling under the awning looks a bit grainy

Not a fan of the first one (probably just how you rendered it... not raw), but the second looks nice and the third pretty good. May have adjusted to the sun a bit more or added a fill.

Should post up some more, larger ones!

Yeah not a big fan of the PP on the first picture, kinda looks like an Iphone picture.
The other 2 look like test snapshots to me.

Maybe show us some more