Suzanne

8 from last weekends shoot. That's the limit right? Please C&C if time allows. The first few were shot with a 50 1.8 and the rest are with a 24-105L on a 50D. Time was Eastern 4PM-5PM

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#4,6,7 & 8 I like and are good.

could be my monitor, but WB on # 1-4 look really good. The others have a yellow cast to them from what I'm seeing.

Nice model who looks very comfortable in front of the camera. Really liked the long coat and shotgun image. Definitely cool.

dave

Most of the poses are quite good, but the first one is not too flattering.

Her arm?

Believe it or not she was very hard to shoot and had absolutely no personality at all.

The last images, the white balance was off, in camera. I tried to correct it but still leave the warmth of the sun coming down.

Any more insight guys?

i like all of them after #3, good job

For someone with no personality you seem to have captured her well. I agree the first one is not a flattering pose but most of the others are nice. Really like the last ones but would work on getting rid of the color cast some more. If you are in lightroom you can use an adjustment brush and paint over the area you want to change with everything at zero but then add a balancing color to compensate in this case a blue color to balance out the yellow.

Im a photoshop user. I did a color adjustment toward the blues on both sliders. But I see what your saying. They could use some more. Thanks for that, to me they were acceptable knowing where the where before.

I did see that I didnt change the white balance in the camera when I moved to this position on the fence and started shooting. I did have a speedlight in an umbrella to her right for fill.

Some "crazy" bokeh in the first 3 photos (not crazy good), definitely the 50mm f/1.8 wide open. Parts of the background are distracting because of the bokeh that lens creates. Lots of tiny circles together drawing my eye's attention.

Thanks for your opinion.