C&C on some senior pics -- Critique Corner in photography-on-the.net forums

Eman.

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Oct 23, 2011 20:48 | #1

So i did some senior pics for my cousin and i'd like some C&C and i'd really like to get better

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Third one i'm trying to work on tones but don't have any great editing software yet just iphoto. Like I said C&C is much appreciated!

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Titus213

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Oct 24, 2011 13:37 | #3

I like the pose in #1 but not the processing. And that tree right in front of his nose is a problem.

#2 is pretty good color and smile but it looks soft and the reflections in the glasses are a bother.

#3 is OK but again, the processing is not something I care for. And he is a very small part of that image.

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drumsfield

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Oct 24, 2011 15:28 | #4

Try it without the post processing first

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