My 1st fashion photo session (indoor)

hi

here is a sample of my 1st fashion photo session, plz comment and give my ur advice on lighting, poses, quality and editing

thanks in advance

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model looked little stiffed and out of focus
keep practicing, you'll get better

Not bad for the first time.

I do agree that the model looked a little stiff and uncomfortable (maybe it's her first time too)
* the first photo her expression is not that great
* the third photo her pose makes her arms look chunkier than it really is
* a few photos look a tad soft.

Just a suggestion, don't go overboard with your copyright logo. You already have one in the bottom right hand corner, there's no need for the large "ainstudio.com" in the middle. It's fairly distracting.

Seems a bit too cluttered for most of the pictures, except for #3. Liked this one, leading lines and all. Is her face a little OOF?

I'd avoid the thumbs in pocket for #4, unless you want the low confidence/uncertain/n​ervous look.

Too much softening on the face.

Bit to soft but good work keep practicing

Thank u all for ur comments

xcel730 wrote in post #13422109
Not bad for the first time.

I do agree that the model looked a little stiff and uncomfortable (maybe it's her first time too)
* the first photo her expression is not that great
* the third photo her pose makes her arms look chunkier than it really is
* a few photos look a tad soft.

Just a suggestion, don't go overboard with your copyright logo. You already have one in the bottom right hand corner, there's no need for the large "ainstudio.com" in the middle. It's fairly distracting.

thank u for ur valuable comments

they have been exploited without permission so i need for the large

agree with the above and the watermarks are very distracting takes away from the photo....

where abouts were you focusing when taking the shots? as like mentioned, face/eyes look soft, and thats what you want to be focusing on. put your camera on centre point af, foucs on the eyes, whilst still half pressing the shutter button - recompose / frame the shot, press shutter fully to take the photo! hope that helps, keep at it!

mr. fish wrote in post #13485792
where abouts were you focusing when taking the shots? as like mentioned, face/eyes look soft, and thats what you want to be focusing on. put your camera on centre point af, foucs on the eyes, whilst still half pressing the shutter button - recompose / frame the shot, press shutter fully to take the photo! hope that helps, keep at it!

thanks mr. for your advice