I'm exhausted from searching and was hoping I might be able to count on fellow photogs here to help me out. I have the opportunity to take headshots for Real Estate Agents and to be honest have not used print releases before. I drew up a personal print release for family members to be able to get prints at their local lab but am having trouble turning it into a print release for the agents.
Basically I want them to be able to use their digitals in magazines, ads, websites, etc. which would be considered "commercial use" right?
Can anybody help "fine tune" my release? I really don't want to have to find a lawyer to draw it up.
Here is what I have...
"
To Whom It May Concern:
“Name” (“Bearer”) has purchased high-resolution digital files from his/her photography session with JPepus Photography. Bearer is hereby granted permission by JPepus Photography to reproduce the images and make an unlimited number of prints, for personal use only. Friends and family may purchase prints or digital copies from JPepus Photography only. This permission applies worldwide.
Bearer agrees that he/she may not use any JPepus Photography images for commercial or
editorial purposes, or enter any JPepus Photography images into competition without the
express written permission of JPepus Photography. JPepus Photography retains
the copyright to all images.
Copyright and Licensing Notice
The images that are being provided to you are licensed to you for any reasonable personal purposes, including but not limited to: printing, copying, emailing, and web publishing. Your license does not include use that results in financial gain, including but not limited to: advertising, stock photography, print sale profit, or resale of any nature.
Your purchase of the original files releases JPepus Photography from any liability due to loss or damage of the images, and also releases JPepus Photography from any obligation
to maintain copies of any digital file, image, or photograph. You hereby grant to JPepus
Photography the right to use and publish images and photographs taken at your photography session to further promote its service, including portfolio, web site, display, advertisement, and editorial use.
JPepus Photography may revoke this license at any time and for any reason. JPepus Photography retains all copyrights to the images and derivative works thereof. By using any
of these images, you are agreeing to the above terms"
Ideas? I'm stuck on whether they need Editorial rights? Commercial?

