My wife got a new dress

.. it has pink hearses printed on it.

C&C is appreciated on composition, posing, lighting, processing. I used my 430EXII for fill light on most of them, no gel.

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Here is my 2 cents
1) here face seems a little out of focus.
2,3,4 love the poses, 3 is my favorite
I like 5, just don't know if it would have been better to have her eyes open.
You have a beautiful wife, nice series!

Thanks for the critique.

On #1 and #2, I was using my 50mm f/1.4, wide open - it's a lot softer than I realized when shooting wide open, and a lot of chromatic aberration. Should have closed it down a stop or two. Might have missed the focus a bit too, a smaller aperture would have helped with that.

#3 through #6 were with the 70-200 f/4, I don't know why I don't use this lens more often, it always gives great results.