SuperHuman21 wrote in post #13525978
Firstly, kudos to going out there and giving it a shot. I'm no portrait guy myself and am more terrified of it than shooting the most difficult still-life project I've done and hope to do, but let's see if I've got this critique thing down for critique's sake.
1) Were these paying clients? I guess it's just how I am but I hate charging people if I don't know what I'm doing.
2) How new are you to studio shooting? I ask because of #3.
3) Your lights are far too weak. You need more DOF and that requires a lot more light to be able to use something like f/8 and ISO 200. Strobes are probably your best bet. Check out Elinchrom's kits (that's another can of worms). I highly recommend experimenting and reading as much as you can. Have time for a chit-chat or a show? Put that off and focus on the lighting. There's a lot to wrap your head around. It always amazes much just how little I know despite all of my months of trying so hard to better myself without having much of a life.
4) Subjects need to stand a good 10 feet, from what I understand, from the background to avoid shadows and to get it out of focus. This can be fixed in photoshop though.
5) The rest isn't important for me. Lighting is by far the most important thing you can learn first, not to mention that it's the hardest to master, so it's best to practice it earlier.
I hope that was useful! It's impossible to tell you what you need to know without knowing your foundational knowledge of lighting and all things photography related. Be specific as you can be.
Thanks for the replies 
1. No way! Good friends of mine.. theres no way in the world i wouldve charged anyone for these.
2. Not sure what you mean, but these were done in my garage, with white backdrop..
3. Yeah ive been looking into getting a pocketwizard setup and some elinchrom strobes, they were a little out of the budget that i gave myself, i actually invested in the cheapo light and backdrop set off ebay $250 odd dollars or so, in hindsight i shouldve gone the other way with the strobes - and i will but not quite yet..
I acutally have downloaded many, many photography vids and tutorials and watched lots, even watched the Strobist dvd's but they just totally babble on and on and on..
But yeah watched plenty - but when it actually comes time to doing it and getting it right, its another story..
Can i acutally take some good shots with the gear i have??
4. Ok ok cool - thats one thing none of tuts ive watched have mentioned, so thanks 
5. I am mostly a into automotive photography, in specific light painting at night - which is as well about understanding light, but in a totally different way ie reflections etc..
Thanks, yes you have helped - appreciate it.