This is my first attempt at a sepia-like image. C&C appreciated.
sceee1991 Senior Member 479 posts Joined May 2007 Location: Kentucky More info | Dec 19, 2011 19:30 | #1 This is my first attempt at a sepia-like image. C&C appreciated. Critique and advice are always appreciated, even when it's brutally honest.
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Joe.Recon Senior Member 674 posts Joined Jan 2011 Location: 45°25'26.8"N 75°41'56.5"W More info | Dec 20, 2011 00:14 | #2 I love sepia processing but I can't make out what that thing on the right is...and that bothers me... Canon 5D MkIII powered through the following Canon lenses: 16-35 f2.8 L MkII, 24-70 f2.8 L MkII, 70-200 f2.8 L MkII, 17mm TS-E f4 L, 24mm TS-E f2.8 L MkII and 85mm f1.2 L MkII.
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Dec 20, 2011 04:56 | #3 It is a buoy. I have one shot pulled back a bit showing more of the buoy, but I ended up liking this one where the words were more clear better. Critique and advice are always appreciated, even when it's brutally honest.
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xepherys Senior Member 807 posts Joined May 2006 Location: 17TLH2445607250 More info | Dec 20, 2011 14:07 | #4 I like the shot from a framing and technical perspective, but the problem with sepia on an image like this is the inferred discoloration of the water. It's a beach, so the sand is actually not far from the color you'd expect, but then the water ends up "feeling" murky/muddy. My Gear: EOS 7D .|. EF 85/1.8 .-. EF 24/2.8 .-. EF 70-200/4L .-. EF 24-70/2.8L .|. 580EX-II
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Dec 20, 2011 15:02 | #5 Thanks for the feedback xepherys. Critique and advice are always appreciated, even when it's brutally honest.
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CactusJuice Senior Member 853 posts Joined Jan 2010 More info | Dec 20, 2011 15:33 | #6 I don't like it, sorry. Even if the image was B&W it wouldn't be interesting. There's nothing particularly interesting about the buoy or all the out of focus water. Perhaps a different composition could serve to make the buoy a better subject.
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No need to apologize. If we all agree on something, then it is likely one or more of us aren't thinking. I have had mixed reactions from the in-person folks I have showed this to ranging from "meh!" to "I love it!". Critique and advice are always appreciated, even when it's brutally honest.
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