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Dec 28, 2011 15:51 |  #1

It's been pretty much forever since I posted here but wanted to let you all know I'm still kicking and very much alive. Check out this recent shoot I did and let me know what ya think! Thanks everyone!

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Dec 28, 2011 16:48 |  #2

Gorgeous! I have no critique...other than this is wonderfully executed and very artistic.


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Dec 28, 2011 20:49 |  #3

The color leaves little doubt as to the subject, but she's too small to suit me. The sax is barely discernible. I'd try cropping away the two trees on the right.




  
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Dec 29, 2011 08:26 |  #4

I actually liked the scope of the image. Having the subject small in comparison to the woodland evokes feelings of solitude, like she is alone and lost in her music. I feel like this is more of an artistic shot, it isn't meant to be a portrait. It's one of my favorite images I've seen on this forum...so well done IMO!


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Dec 29, 2011 09:53 |  #5

Thank you Lindsay. That was actually my thought process on making this image. I wanted it somewhat surreal, yet broad enough to tell a story. Your description is spot on to my feelings as well. Thanks again!


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Dec 29, 2011 23:12 as a reply to  @ newgenphoto's post |  #6

Very nice, love the creativity!


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Dec 29, 2011 23:38 |  #7

I love it. If I had a suggestion it would to be tighter crop. I have bad eyes, and squinted to see what was in the trees.


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