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Dec 29, 2011 21:15 |  #1

1.

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4. and 5.
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What would you change? I know that framing is little clumsy - but there wasn't much space to move around, and I have only primes.

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Dec 30, 2011 00:37 |  #2

Great shots! Crisp, bright and nicely framed.


You guys make good AMMO over there too btw!


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Dec 30, 2011 03:10 |  #3

I like these. You've captured some good moments.


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Dec 30, 2011 09:55 |  #4

So, my biggest question is: did the guitarist ever open his eyes? Closed-eye shots are not as compelling as open. Compare to #3.

Color balance seems warm in all of them.

I'd be tempted to do some skin smoothing on the lead singer, as the lighting was not kind to her.

The background, although out of focus, is distracting in lots of them. It's tough to get around this, but you did in #4

#1 would have been a nice presentation except for the bit of gear in the foreground.

#2 is a nice idea, but you cut off the guitarist's shoulder in sacrificing to the lead singer who is out of focus. Perhaps if you waited for them to drift closer, you would have gotten a better shot.


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Dec 30, 2011 11:07 |  #5

Thanks for the comments, everyone. :)

True - he rarely opens his eyes while singing. Opened eyes on this one, but no singing:

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I left the color temperature little warmer on purpose, you think I overdid it?

About framing - I have only primes, and it was relatively small club packed with people. It was hard to avoid background, and also I had to pay attention not to disturb people who got there for the music, and not to be shuffled around by some guy with the camera. :)

Unfortunately, photos couldn't capture incredible voice that she has:
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@JTX: LOL, true - they were never able to make a car (google for Yugo :D ), but they produce fine rifles and ammo.

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Dec 30, 2011 11:34 |  #6

Nice shots given the limitations of space and shooting angles. The warm touch is fine and shot #5 does an excellent job of capturing the emotion of the moment.


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