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Dec 30, 2011 14:51 |  #1

Hey guys, was wondering what critique you guys might have so that I can improve! thanks again! :D

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Dec 30, 2011 21:28 |  #2

First has a ton of potential, nice composition and great location. My critique is you just happened to be there at the wrong time of day, the lighting is a just a bit flat in the foreground. If you have access to this location on a regular basis I would definitely go back for a sunset or sunrise and play with some different exposures. Did you edit the sky at all? Seems off a little.

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Dec 30, 2011 22:17 |  #3

Thanks for the critique, I should have mentioned that indeed. I was definetely there are the wrong time of the day (I was there at the worst time of the day, like 3 pm...had no other time slot for it) I don't live in the area so I can't go back =(. And, because I didn't have a GND the sky was blown out so I had to stick in a gradient sky.

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