It was 75 degrees on December 31, and we took advantage of this great weather with a zoo trip. I shot a few pics of my daughter; I value your critiques as I am an amateur looking to improve. Thanks!
Brainstormin Member 86 posts Joined Mar 2011 More info | Jan 01, 2012 12:14 | #1 It was 75 degrees on December 31, and we took advantage of this great weather with a zoo trip. I shot a few pics of my daughter; I value your critiques as I am an amateur looking to improve. Thanks! Newbie
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Jan 01, 2012 12:16 | #2 |
Jan 03, 2012 17:52 | #3 C/C greatly appreciated. Newbie
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Michael1984 Senior Member 641 posts Joined Feb 2010 Location: Harrisburg, PA More info | Jan 03, 2012 17:59 | #4 Really like #2 .. try and clean up the face a little in PP.. background is a bit under exposed.. and the the vertical lines arent vertical ... try cropping it so the fence is straight see how that looks
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imagesbybarbara Goldmember More info | Jan 03, 2012 17:59 | #5 Your daughter is very pretty. You look like you do the same thing that I do and that is cropping to close to your subject. Since it was a zoo trip maybe try to incorporate the zoo with the portraits. The third image is a tad more yellow than the first two, I am not an expert so I hope I was able to help. 16-35 2.8L 24-105L 35 1.4L 135L 50 1.4 85 1.8 and 100 macro, 5D, 5D2, 40D, 20D, (3) 550, 2 Sunpak 555, white lighting studio set-up.
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starkyrulz Senior Member 561 posts Joined Oct 2011 Location: Calcutta, India More info | Jan 03, 2012 18:01 | #6 3. nice - looks soft though. Could be sharper | 5D Mark III | T3i | 24-70 f2.8 MK II L | 70-200 f2.8 IS mk II L | 18-200 f3.5-5.6 | Σ 30mm f1.4 | 50 f1.8 | 430exII | YongnouYN560 | YongnouRF603 | Vangaurd 263AT |
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Jan 03, 2012 18:48 | #7 Thank you! That is helpful. I always have a problem with focus. I have tried everything that I know to do, but this is as good as I can get it. I think I need to take some lessons Newbie
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