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Jan 02, 2012 21:22 |  #1

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Jan 02, 2012 21:25 |  #2

I like the mood and shot overall, just wish there was more room on the right side, the wheel is framed a bit tight.


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Jan 02, 2012 21:34 |  #3

Allan.L wrote in post #13636882 (external link)
I like the mood and shot overall, just wish there was more room on the right side, the wheel is framed a bit tight.

Thanks, bunch of clutter on that side, cropped as wide as I could...




  
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Jan 03, 2012 05:07 as a reply to  @ tmoore323's post |  #4

And the more I look at it, the more I agree, so adding a bit more to the right:

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Jan 03, 2012 05:16 |  #5

If you added more to the right then you would need to add more to the left as well otherwise it would all be too central.
I think the greatest improvement would come from trying to get the rail more level. I realise it was probably on a slope because the tower on the left looks right although the pole doesn't but that sloping rail was the first thing to hit me.

Otherwise a really nice shot.

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Jan 03, 2012 06:09 as a reply to  @ Ramon-uk's post |  #6

See what you mean, half asleep when I did the last one and didn't even notice the slope...

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Jan 03, 2012 06:52 |  #7

Look at the roof camera left. You may be level and the scene actually is on a slope

There's omething interesting about the symmetry of the buildings and he carriage plus the gaze of the horse which I like in this shot.


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Jan 03, 2012 06:57 |  #8

Nice colors and lighting. Like the feel of the shot and the snow falling.


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Jan 03, 2012 07:00 |  #9

S.Horton wrote in post #13638355 (external link)
Look at the roof camera left. You may be level and the scene actually is on a slope

There's omething interesting about the symmetry of the buildings and he carriage plus the gaze of the horse which I like in this shot.

Thanks, the scene is on a bit of a slope this is more what it looked like - if you look you can see I used the chimeney on the house to straighten up on the last one.

The statue horse is on a bit of an angle like that in reality as well.




  
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Jan 03, 2012 07:03 |  #10

Yep, then you are level. If you made e fence level, it would look strange.


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Jan 03, 2012 07:04 |  #11

tomholman wrote in post #13638369 (external link)
Nice colors and lighting. Like the feel of the shot and the snow falling.

Thanks!




  
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Jan 03, 2012 09:11 |  #12

It's a beautiful shot with a lot of feeling. Personally, I would spend the time to clone out the telephone pole and all those wires, and then print a big one for the den wall.


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Jan 03, 2012 10:41 |  #13

Jon C wrote in post #13638836 (external link)
It's a beautiful shot with a lot of feeling. Personally, I would spend the time to clone out the telephone pole and all those wires, and then print a big one for the den wall.

Thanks, that's a thought!




  
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