Kylee

I have been getting into editorial/fashion photography lately and have been shooting models. This is my second time shooting with one. Critiques and comments are welcomed!

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(don't take this the wrong way, it's a nice set, and I'm sure she loved them)
Very pretty model, horizon line is crooked in #1, hate the effect in #2, her hair looks really weird in #3, #4 has a really distracting BG. In all of the images, the subject is centered. Mix it up a little with the composition. If it didn't have that effect, #2 would be the clear winner for me. Can you post up one w/o the blur. Thanks for sharing.

Interesting work, nice composition. Congratulations

rsieminski wrote in post #13662618
(don't take this the wrong way, it's a nice set, and I'm sure she loved them)
Very pretty model, horizon line is crooked in #1, hate the effect in #2, her hair looks really weird in #3, #4 has a really distracting BG. In all of the images, the subject is centered. Mix it up a little with the composition. If it didn't have that effect, #2 would be the clear winner for me. Can you post up one w/o the blur. Thanks for sharing.

Thanks rsieminski for the critiques . Probably need to work in my composition.

yea not a fan of the blur in #2

Beautiful girl, nice poses and overall pretty nice work. I don't mind your horizon too much but I do agree your DOF is a little thin on a couple of those.

Haha! 1.4-2.0 is usually my aperture range.

You have good intuitions, but I'm not a fan of using a 35mm focal length for portraits.