Krystal

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3 would be my fav if the shirt wasnt so washed out. i love the pose.

2 is missing some toes..

R u just sharing or are you looking for CC?

CC is welcomed.

Her skin looks different in each shot...

Beautiful model, though, Tiberius is right. Her skin tones is different in most pics. Pay attention to these little details. ;P

WolfAmongSheep wrote in post #13720838
3 would be my fav if the shirt wasnt so washed out. i love the pose.

+1 Love the pose, and shoes, but she needs to be wearing a different shirt for this background.

The first two looks a little too hot.

The darken at the bottom of the photo you are too high a shutter speed for your wireless sync. I would reduce shutter speed to 160 or 125, no need for 1/200th.

Pretty good stuff. Besides what everyone else has already commented on, the umbrella reflections in her glasses in the last one are really distracting.

Thanks for the feedback.