White BMW 135i, BBS, 3 Photographs, 2 Rolling Shots, 1 Static.

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i like the first to maybe next time get a more detailed shoot of the rims. and the last one p.p is a little to fake for me but good job.

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By more detail to the wheels, you mean...?
They are nicely lit.

Why does the 3rd one appear fake to you?

I like it, but #2 looks OOF.

Jordan_Inc wrote in post #13726135
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By more detail to the wheels, you mean...?
They are nicely lit.

Why does the 3rd one appear fake to you?

the driver side wheel/tire on the 3rd image looks like its about 4in wide. you must have left some of it out in selecting. so it looks way too skinny when you did a good job on the rest of them.

looking through the car windows the background that shows through doesnt match well with the rest of the image. dont forget to edit through the windows too.

the light tones where the car is selected and obviously edited to stand out are too different from the scene where the car is. thus making it look pasted into the image. look at the front passenger side tire. it looks like its floating off the ground to me because i see highlights under it rather than shadow.

the smoke from the cig is floating upward like the car isnt moving. i would have just left that out. you wouldnt really see any smoke because the wind would be blowing it away too quick.

i love 1 and 2 but 3 isnt nearly as good as the others.

^ Thanks for the advices.

Fixed!

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The all look OOF and the 'rolling shots' look too heavily PP'd to me.

Sexy car, I'd love to see some detailed shots of the wheels/ stance of the car.

Although, it seems like a lot of trouble to PP rolling shots when you could just take rolling shots?

WOW amazing shots, I really like them!

Jordan_Inc wrote in post #13729991
^ Thanks for the advices.

Fixed!

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BMW 135i by Jordan Mo Photography, on Flickr

Much much much better! That made a huge difference

I LOVE that first rolling shot!

Well done,they look good!

First rolling shot is very nice, but there's too much fake motion blur going on in #3 for me. i'd ditch the lens flare as well.