Another one of still life. How'd I do?
csondagar Senior Member 792 posts Likes: 2 Joined Mar 2004 Location: Victoria, Canada More info | Feb 06, 2012 10:04 | #1 PermanentlyAnother one of still life. How'd I do?
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UnCapitalista Hatchling 5 posts Joined Feb 2012 More info | Feb 06, 2012 10:11 | #2 Permanent banSPAM PUT AWAY This post is marked as spam. |
Not keen on the arrangement myself, the picture on the wall doesn't seem to fit with the table.
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Feb 07, 2012 09:30 | #4 You've made a busy incoherent scene in your first attempt even busier and less coherent in this one. You have an ornate table on which lies a pillow supporting a vertical plate with a flower lain in front, some unrecognizable fruit in a basket next to a pomegranate, all of which is draped quite artificially with what looks like a bathrobe. Then above all that, consisting of 1/2 the frame there is some abstract painting with an African motif. It looks very contrived. What's the subject? Where's the light and shadow? I think you might do better if you work with fewer elements and play with light and shadow. -- Image Editing OK --
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andrew_patterson Senior Member 305 posts Joined Feb 2011 Location: Kitchener, ON, Canada More info | Feb 07, 2012 09:37 | #5 My personal philosophy with still life is that you are photographing inanimate "still" objects in such a way that makes them have "life". In this I see more of a snapshot-ish product style shot, since like others have mentioned, the arrangement isn't very good. Canon T1i/500D
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csondagar THREAD STARTER Senior Member 792 posts Likes: 2 Joined Mar 2004 Location: Victoria, Canada More info | Feb 08, 2012 14:17 | #6 PermanentlyThanks for the comments. I will keep practising!
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digicIV Member 64 posts Joined Jan 2012 More info | Feb 13, 2012 20:44 | #7 still life it is and nothing more
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