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Feb 06, 2012 10:04 |  #1
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Another one of still life. How'd I do?

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Feb 06, 2012 13:13 as a reply to  @ UnCapitalista's post |  #3

Not keen on the arrangement myself, the picture on the wall doesn't seem to fit with the table.

Again the white balance looks a shade off to me.

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Feb 07, 2012 09:30 |  #4

You've made a busy incoherent scene in your first attempt even busier and less coherent in this one. You have an ornate table on which lies a pillow supporting a vertical plate with a flower lain in front, some unrecognizable fruit in a basket next to a pomegranate, all of which is draped quite artificially with what looks like a bathrobe. Then above all that, consisting of 1/2 the frame there is some abstract painting with an African motif. It looks very contrived. What's the subject? Where's the light and shadow? I think you might do better if you work with fewer elements and play with light and shadow.


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Feb 07, 2012 09:37 |  #5

My personal philosophy with still life is that you are photographing inanimate "still" objects in such a way that makes them have "life". In this I see more of a snapshot-ish product style shot, since like others have mentioned, the arrangement isn't very good.


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Thanks for the comments. I will keep practising!



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Feb 13, 2012 20:44 |  #7

still life it is and nothing more




  
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