Critique

If you look at the folder your images are in using windows explorer (or finder if on a mac), you should be able to see an XMP file beside the RAW files you edited. That's where. BTW, did you send the raw file? I haven't gotten anything in my inbox.

I think so
e mail me back

Here's me edit. Noise is definitely your biggest issue (besides the extreme tilt, should be no excuse for that). Your exposure on the original is about a stop under... this is really magnifying a lot of the noise. I did some noise reduction in LR. Noiseware or another standalone program may do a slightly better job. If I were you, I would definitely look at getting an 85 1.8. That 1 1/3 stop will help you immensely.

thanks
I did edit the tilt
so basically this is about the best I can hope for?
this prob wasnt my best pic
I just picked one that had some decent action

thanks for all your help and time

dude from the Waco Trib shot the same game at 4000 iso
the dude is killing me
but he brought about 15000 dollars worth of Nikon stuff

either I need to win the lotto
or get it from a dead inlaw
wait all my inlaws are gone
Im the only one left

insert head banging wall smiley here

thanks for your time
I know its valuable

Or just buy used