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Feb 17, 2012 04:09 |  #1

Hello everyone, Here are three versions of a photo I took while in England. Please let me know what you think, what could be improved etc. Thanks!

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IMAGE: http://lasavio.com/images/potn/english_countryside_1.jpg


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Feb 17, 2012 04:35 |  #2

I don't see much difference between the 1st and 3rd...maybe the crop?

For me, it lacks some foreground interest - it needs something more to hold my interest. On a technical note, watch out for the dust bunny in the top right corner.


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Feb 17, 2012 04:39 |  #3

Mike wrote in post #13913295 (external link)
I don't see much difference between the 1st and 3rd...maybe the crop?

For me, it lacks some foreground interest - it needs something more to hold my interest. On a technical note, watch out for the dust bunny in the top right corner.

Thanks Mike, yes the only difference is the crop between 1 and 3. Oops I could have sworn I cloned that spot out, oops :-) Fixed it...


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Feb 17, 2012 04:51 |  #4

Here's one with a bit of foreground from the same area.

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Feb 17, 2012 04:58 |  #5

Is this Yorkshire?


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Feb 17, 2012 05:13 |  #6

Mike wrote in post #13913348 (external link)
Is this Yorkshire?

Penrith area / Northern Lake District... That's pretty close to Yorkshire yes?


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Feb 17, 2012 08:18 |  #7

Love this shot better. What a difference some foreground interest can make. Keep up the good work!




  
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