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Feb 19, 2012 10:25 |  #1

Took this picture on the backyard of my girlfriends house before leaving early in the morning. Sometimes I like to take a picture just to see what I can do with it in Photoshop.
Here is a before and after picture, let me know what you think and please feel free to edit the original and post your results.

I know the pictures isn't nothing much interesting, but it's mostly just the editing I am interested in hearing feedback on. Photo was taken handheld very early morning.

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Feb 19, 2012 17:12 |  #2

Looks like you brought out a lot of details - good job.

Now, my critiques:
1) Too cool, warm it up a tad
2) It's substantially underexposed
3) Next time, keep the horizon a bit lower -- try not to put it smack in the middle of the frame. This will create more drama.

Otherwise, it's a pretty cool picture.


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Feb 19, 2012 19:17 as a reply to  @ toastyphoto's post |  #3

Nice job with the sky. Cloud detail is good. Like toasty said, try to keep to the rule of thirds for the horizon line. I cropped a bit to bring it to the rule of thirds and I adjusted the lighting a bit. Not necessarily better than your edit, but different.

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Feb 19, 2012 21:26 |  #4

Picture is definitely better looking than the original. But I don't think the picture itself is very interesting.


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Feb 19, 2012 21:58 as a reply to  @ djphatjive's post |  #5

Colors look better in this one?


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Feb 19, 2012 22:23 as a reply to  @ SimpleJack's post |  #6

Nice cloning work. Better.


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Feb 19, 2012 22:36 |  #7

M_Six wrote in post #13927311 (external link)
Nice cloning work. Better.

Agreed.


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Feb 19, 2012 23:09 |  #8
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I really like the edit, great work. It is surprising how much detail is hidden in some photos.




  
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