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Feb 21, 2012 00:17 |  #1

what do you guys think?

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Feb 21, 2012 02:59 |  #2

Love the pose and her expression. It's cropped a little too tightly on the left, and you could use some fill to get rid of the shadow on the wall. It doesn't seem very sharp, but I'll attribute that to compression (or my eyesight). Nice job overall.


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Feb 21, 2012 15:05 |  #3

Decent light though a little flat and could use more fill on her face. I would move her away from the wall and light it or let it fade to grey, or I would move her closer and blast some more light to make the shadow part of the photo


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Feb 22, 2012 03:47 |  #4

thanks guys.ya that shadow bugs me.i might get rid of it in photoshop.




  
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Feb 22, 2012 04:26 |  #5

The left of her face needs fill as mentioned. Also I think it would be better without the animal fur, it just doesn't go with the rest of the outfit IMO. I like the pose and the model, but maybe blur the flank skin fold.


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